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My Home Town -舟塔作文
In our ordinary daily lives, we don’t even think about just writing an essay—most people just write their thoughts and sentences. Writing an essay involves considering one's ideas and organizing them into a series of words to express the meaning of something. If you can't figure out how to write an essay, it means you’re missing the point.
The essay is written in a narrative form: through words, language, or sounds, people try to present a story that tells a specific message. So if your essay isn’t working, there are two things you can do: 1) You can rethink what kind of essay you need to write; 2) You can maybe just tweak one sentence here and there.
The text below is about my home town—the舟塔 community in the Middle Nort High School. It was written for your enjoyment, so feel free to read it.
My Home Town -舟塔作文
I grew up in Nivas,舟塔乡，舟塔村。 I’m now a student at the舟塔 high school. How is that related to “knight” or “town” though? Well, it’s all about a structure called a tower. A tower is like a tall and strong place.
When I first entered my high school, I thought of looking out over the campus’s main building. The tall gray towers stood side by side on a central pier. Each tower was made from massive stone blocks that were 4 meters in diameter and had 8 layers, shaped like an octagon. The front of each tower looked like it has hands-up flags—saying “we all need to look up.” It’s looking at the sky in the morning, and in the evening.
Each flag also had a small bell below. When I stepped back from the pier, I could hear a voice inside—something similar to “make sure the air is fresh! Let me make you laugh too!” If that sounds familiar, it might be the same voice calling out the community.
Next to each flag was a small whistle in bright colors—whistles are birds’ songs. It’s a signal for people walking by and for children playing outside.
When I stepped up into my high school class, there was an elevator just above me. As I rode it up, I saw something amazing—a massive tower that could lift all the students. That was the tower they talked about in their essay. The tower had lights on its sides, indicating how many kids were going to attend my town.
When I stepped down from the elevator and looked out at the campus from a distance, I could see even more towers—the ones of Nivas high school, nivas junior high, etc. But these are all part of what I call the舟塔 community.
One night, a wild animal tried to attack my town. It was angry and didn’t let people sleep easily because it was hungry. When I heard about this bad situation in my essay, I felt sad but hopeful—my town would get stronger and better over time. The tower would do its best for me.
Years later, after a long while, the wooden elevator finally fell into place, bringing all the towns together again. The tower now looked even taller and more imposing than before. People began to talk more of their stories and jokes—sounds like “why don’t we have a town hall?” or maybe “how do you make friends with kids so small!”
Some years after that, the wooden elevator broke down. It needed more attention to prevent an overflow. I used it as a sign to rebuild my town with more towers in different areas. The tower stood tall, but now, it was like the bridge over the river, connecting all parts of the community.
Over time, people started to live in my town more easily than ever before. But even so, this tower remained strong because it represented the future—how we could make everything better together. It looked almost as old as I am and still taller than anyone else around me.
The tower has an impressive history. My home was on a place called “knight’s Hill” in Nivas,舟塔乡. That name probably means that someone from my town had heard about the hill and wanted to explore it to see how it looked. But the real story is behind the tower itself—a tall old tower that’s been there since ancient times.
The tower was built by people who lived in that area for many years. It’s made of stone, but over time, it got taller and wider as people added more towers nearby. The tower has been a symbol of pride because it holds so much history and stories. It reminds me of the river I swim every day—how we can find strength even if the path is hard to walk.
I think about my home today. I know that this tower is still standing tall, but I also know that it’s going to keep growing until it’s as big as it needs to be for all the children and adults here. The tower will serve as a reminder of how we can work together and make our communities even stronger.
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